Need an annotated bibliography and final paper on Master’s Level
Proofing Summary:
Thank you for submitting your paper to NetTutor! My name is Bailee, and I enjoyed reading your essay about dissociative identity disorder!
Strengths:
Your thesis is great! It explains your main point well. Your Reference page is good! There are very little issues with your grammar & mechanics! Your sentence structure had a lot of variety! Awesome job!
Suggestions:
To develop your thesis more, consider adding the main points in your essay as your supporting claims. I asked a few questions throughout the review of the paper. Consider answering them to help develop your topic more! For your in-text citations, APA format wants you to do them a different way. In the review, I gave an outline to what it looks like. For more information on APA formatting, please visit the Purdue Owl website!


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